needs more
it was pretty good and it takes a special kind of person to be able to make good claymations/stopframe animations but you'v just doing whats been done before, your doing it well enought to move up a step i think, i mean try modle some more detailed characters, try looking at chickenrun, all their characters are build in a specific way, give them some eyes and a nose.. and yeah some clothes =) it'll end up being alot more work and a hell of a challenge but in the end it'll be worth it =) and then you better yourself. I also like that it had a humorous plotline but yeah i feel that you can do alot more with the clay, and bigger more exaurated movments =) goodluck and i look forward to seeing somthing really cool =)