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its alright

the animation was pretty good and so was the music, but its jst the action, i think it was to slow, think thats why vry1 lost intrest. u can be the greatest animator in the world but if u cnt tel a sotry and make it exciting then its gna b a flop. i have the same problem :) so yeah work on making it more exciting. good luck

Jimtopia responds:

If you read my response to Bframe's review (2 below this one), it explains why I didn't make it very action orientated. Anyway, thanks for reviewing.

nice

good graphics good animation and music aswell, keep it up :)

Voodoo responds:

Thanks :D

another one lol

yeah the replay is working matey... i do recon you could have spent alot more time on the animation.. like alot, it looks and feels really glitchy...is thats the right word... but u didn't draw on your hand like all the other people trying to copy the original so i;m not blamin it :) but i recon spend some more time re record it, PUT SOME INTHUSIASM INTO IT lol if u get what i mean, fix the animation.. you know how to motion tween stuf don't you?.. google it if you don't, and um yeah... put more animation into it :D then you can replace this one with somthing really cool... hoop you make it into the portal tho :) i get a save point then haha good luck

mmm

the movment of the charcters was quite good.. why are you wasting your time on sticks? make somthing new and better, you seem to know your way around flash, use ur knowlege to make somthing new :) goos luck

threassance responds:

thanks. you see for me stick figures is the basic of using flash perfectly, my goal is to reach an ultimate limit with this before starting on with real stuff. and i think i like stick animations a lot, to the extend of trying to build it more and more making it up to the next level. but thanks anyway a appreciate your opinion.

was ok

personally iv gotten tierd with madness and the concept, i recon if you put some thought to it you could come up with somthing new... even though you kinda upgraded the old idea... it still feels old.. sorry jst what i think :) good luck

mm ok

i didn't really find it that funny to be honest, the animation could use alot of work but you have an alright story telling ability :) voices where done pretty good, keep it up yeah...

it was a bit short

the animation was quite good, but it was pretty short, got a message tho lol so its pretty nice. how about making a series or somthing...you seem to have the nessesary skills :D good luck with you 2008 :)

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i didn't find it entertaining eh...and thats your job :) animation was alight..wel not really animation there wasn't much movment just stil images, and i'm not sure what the chacracters are talking about.. maybe record some voices and do the lip sync of your characters, just make for a better cartoon yeah :)

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how about a few more drawing eh?? 24 fps doen't really help if you dnt have much drawing...keep it up eh :)

aw yeah

it was ok, there are still a few flaws in the story line...so does everyone get to touch that ball and get an element? the text at the start disapears to fast and i culdn't read it lol you have to consider stupid people like me haha, the graphics wheren't to bad... but can use alot of work :) stil an alright submission, sounds like an interesting storyline to :) hope you gets of feed back from people so the next one can be heaps better yeah :D

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