wynand's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[: Door Holding :]

i agree

this is really boring and just feels like foamy is ur way of YELLING out ur opinion, i mean he doesn't even have a mouth... so no mouth sync, the background is jst a raster version of a photo you have like 3 or 4 main poses... animationwise this is nothing and since this has been a series on newgrounds for so long i believe you are expected to do at least a decent cartoon. i'm from australia and we still hold the door for other people here so i cant really relate to what ur saying.. and no girl has ever said no lol. i recomend you spend the next few months making an awsome foamy cartoon, like a next generation one, somthing that will make the animation hungry people of new grounds drool, you know jst to spyt me and this here review =) goodluck

[Second Cup of Coffee]

cool

there are some cool frame by frame animation in here, now if you didn't do this as a rush project this could have been a really sweet project, but for the moment you get a 3 =) goodluck on ur next cartoon

hoorayformeallright responds:

It was quite a rush, that's for sure. I will keep your words in my head on my next flash. Keep on rockin' in the free world!

[I like birds...]

very nice

great actually, you kept with the visually tasty style al the way thru and u shuld be proud =), animation went wel with the song and it kept me entertained all the way thru, very well done and goodluck with your next project.
ps reminds me of that little man on the line... starts with a L(french i think) but yeah. is that where you got ur inspiration?

[Awesome Video Game - Ep33]

More

MORE ANIMATION less video, the green screen bit was prety cool, but apart from that i didn't like it and i think this belongs on youtube not newgrounds.

[Crows' Life Episode 3]

great

this is awsome, good animation and a great storyline, and i really like the character design, and the story telling is really nice and fluint aswell. mate i think if you promote this wel u culd end up with a tv series or suming. good luck =) hope some high up producer sees this =). Good work =)

[Meet The Moon]

very cool

ferociously cute =) keep up the good work

[Spidley and Spooch]

pretty nice

but its like you've studies some animation principles but u havn't quite got the hang of flash yet, should try a wacom tablet, i'v started investing in one myself :). but the animation speed was quite slow and seemed to drag on. there where some funny bits but i feel you could have told the story with alot less scenes and in a min or two, i mean the sotry isn't that exciting and packed ful of things the viewer has to figure out and ponder about, just simple, short and straight forward i think.... but yeah pretty good, some of the styles i don't think agree with each other.. but yeah hope u get better and goodluck with your next movie

[Another Day Eight]

good animation

but i agree with some of the other reviews, the music didn't fit at all, i see your trying to tel a story witht he music..but the story sequence... wel it didn't feel quite right, not claiming to be a good music vid animator or nethink, urs r prolly beter than myne, but it seemed like you where jst animating a story that wuld usually have sound but replacing it with a song that doesn't fit and gets annoying. good animation and style tho, the story telling and the music is what you need to work on... i do 2 :) so good luck and hope u do well

[A Forgotten Piece: A Duel]

pretty nice

composition pretty good, you could even throw a couple of angled shots in there for tension and diorientation. but the animation.. feels like only the main keys where there, like if you inbetweened it and played it on 2's this would look really cool. but i feel it kinda lacks action, and tension... i'm not sure iv been trying to study movies but i havn't really animated anything and applied it haha. so i cnt really talk lol but as a viewer i think theres somthing lacking in that respect, but overall it looks nice, good art just need more frames more movment and more action :) Good luck with part 2... you could even make them longer :) enjoy

[Learn some Magnetism]

cool, interesting

that was pretty cool matey, i myself have done a skool project in flash :). many years ago haha. but yeah if u wanted to inprove you could make a charackter.. like instead of a smiley, make some scientist looking fela :) and yeah mouth sync of course :). that plus maybe redraw all the images, like by urself and then sel the story in your own way, might make it even nicer :) even tho thats all a lot of work haha, it seems like it was good practice :) gd on yea and gd luck wif ur next movie
and also witf getting a good mark for science haha

Morningdeath responds:

I did only have 10 days to make this during school so I couldn't really lip sink and make a proper character. I did redraw the images....Did they look copied????