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looks alright

try watching the proportions of the lower body, specially the thighs =) they are one of the most delicious parts of the female =) and the same with the legs, and the feet aswell, doesn't look like a stylistic desision, and the pose looks a bit stiff, try playing with the line of action and really nailing the pose before you make it look pretty =)
going to have a peek at your more recent stuff now =)
goodluck with all your bits and bobs =)
-will

cool =)

Nice, i like the funky strip layouts and the art style which will eventually develop to look great =) not sure what the second to last panel is though... maybe think about the layouts of the strips a bit more? but pretty cool comic, good luck yeah +D
-will

=)

yeah like the funky prespective shot, the elbow looks a bit big/fatish i guess but yeah nice line of action and ofcourse boobie =), not sure if the face fits the style to well or somthing, just looks kinda off as everyone else has mentioned =)
but yeah i like it and yes.... i did click it cause of the boobies =( lol might havto incorporate the same strategy mwhaha =P
goodluck further yeah
-will

hey mate

Looks alright, not sure if its the glare or what but it doesn't read to well, think maybe work on the silhouette and layout side of the drawing more before spending all the time rendering it. Yeah thats my main issue, it doesn't read to well, and i'm not sure what pose she's in, and i get confused trying to look at the blade.. again maybe the glare has some sort of influnce there, the foreshortning of the arm kinda works tho =) and thats a hard thing to do.. the head doesn't really seem to fit the body or the style, maybe to fit the style of the body give her a neck and a bit more expressive face, again all in the planning =) keep on practising =)
Hope these point help you
goodluck
-will

KILLY12 responds:

Well I dont have a scanner so I have to take the picture with a camera, that why you get that glare right there, and why it looks like she has no facial expression. I guess I should have added the other leg so you can see she jumping but I guess I was to lazy.

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